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Katara was barely aware that she just walked into her room and sat on the bed, her head spinning and her mind in a war-like state, all her thoughts screaming in her head.
How could everyone trust Zuko so quick? She asked herself over and over again.
They can't possibly have forgotten how he chased us around the world, making our life hell. How could they believe he suddenly changed his mind?

As Katara was still thinking about it, she wandered around her room to calm herself down when she suddenly noticed the vial for spirit water Pakku gave her on a small desk. She couldn't remember how it got there but she was all furious again remembering how she offered to heal Zukos scar and how she had to use it to save Aangs life because of Zukos betrayal. She felt like her feelings could burn her body down. She touched the necklace and suddenly the burning faded and she calmed down.
Is this what firebending feels like? The question suddenly popped into her mind.

She came to realize several things at once.

Zuko hadn't tricked her or meant to betray her, he was scared.
The reason why the rest of the Gaang accepted him was that they saw he really changed and forgave him and she hadn't. And the reason she couldn't forgive him wasn't for trying to hurt Aang or chasing them or teaming up with Azula in the cave but her very own selfish feelings. Back there she felt something she barely remembered... Being understood.
I proudly present my very first fanfiction Betrayal of the Heart
I really hope you like it. I will submit Part 2 next week. (:


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Characters Michael Dante DiMartino and Bryan Konietzko

Story Ideenkotze

This story takes place in the Episode The Western Air Temple
It's like what might have happened 'behind the scenes', things we didn't see and thoughts we didn't hear but still might be true.

*Stories marked with a * happen in the same 'universe'
I might try writing a oneshot where things happened differently later, thats why I mark the ones which are connected.

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Part 5
Part 6
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Kenliano Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, the pictures are from Google or something aren't they? :/ Sorry.

This little story is cute.
Ideenkotze Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Student Photographer
the pictures are from other deviantart artist which are credited in the discription.(:
Kenliano Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, sorry about that. I was strapped for time, so I just read the deviation itself. Heh.
Ideenkotze Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student Photographer
Dont worry, I'm just happy you read my story (:
I just dont want the artist to be sad because someone mistakes their pictures as mine.^^
AnimeLoverAimz Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
I love this, it is so true to katara's feelings towards Zuko... Great work :D
Ideenkotze Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Photographer
thaaaaaaaaaaaaanks alot (:
OnceUponALie Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Love it so far! Can't wait for more!
Ideenkotze Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Photographer
Thank you so much :blush:
There will be coming more soon (:
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