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The kiss before they invaded the fire nation.

She had entirely forgotten about it.
Her first kiss.
With her best friend, who was also like a little brother to her.
The feeling in her stomach grew worse.
Is this what people are talking about when they say you get 'butterflies in your belly'? She had always imagined it totally different, more like happiness and joy instead of guilt and sickness.
Was it wrong to kiss him? Does he have a crush on me? Am I having a crush on him? Am I raising his hopes for something more than friendship?
So many questions and no answers.
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Everyone was tugging into their dinner greedily since Katara entirely forgot to fix lunch for them. The mood was lightly and happy and Katara let herself get swept with the mood, trying to forget her worries.
She noticed Zuko looking at her sometimes during the meal in what looked like agony. She got annoyed and gave him a dirty look so he would look away.

If she only knew Zuko could feel her pain himself because he grew up without ever having someone who cared about him or understood him after his mother left...
Part 4 is up!(:
I dont know whats wrong with Part 3 but im comparison to the other two parts, it didnt even get a quater of the faves, which made me a little unconfident. Maybe because I didnt feature a picture?

please let me always know what you think!
thanks for reading ♥

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Picture KUNGPOW333 [link]

Characters Michael Dante DiMartino and Bryan Konietzko

Story Ideenkotze
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Part 1 [link]
Part 2 [link]
Part 3 [link]

Part 5 [link]
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LEGOLASLOVERTRINITY Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
This is sooooooo beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(way better than me)
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Ideenkotze Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Student Photographer
Thank youuuu! (;
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LEGOLASLOVERTRINITY Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
Your welllllllllllllllllll come
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caseva Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Honestly, a picture does grab my attention more quickly when I'm browsing than text, so you could be right about why some parts get more faves than others. I enjoyed your writing, but you might reconsider "tugging into their dinner," I believe the phrase is "tucking into your dinner" unless you were making this unusual word choice deliberately, in which case, go for it.
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Ideenkotze Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Student Photographer
Ohh thanks for pointing that out, it was a mistake! O:
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Ideenkotze Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Student Photographer
DA wont let me change it >_< how embarassing!
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Kenliano Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This picture looks great. I'll check out the first four pieces of this story, too.
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Ideenkotze Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Student Photographer
The picture is great indeed, but not mine. Check out the link in the discription, you might want to tell this the artist(:
I hope you like the story(:
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